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DIRTYRU55IAN · 05-08-2008, 02:46 PM

ok i need to write a rap song for a class about pollution and how its bad. no swearing or anything like that. heres what i have so far. anyone can help write whatever.

walkin down the street i see ciggarette butts
pop cans, plastic bags even plastic cups

i dont understand how they can be so lazy
pollutin the globe man you know its crazy

some of this trash dont even biodegrade
sooner or later it'll blow up like a grenade

all around the globe, from hong kong to sarasota
yall better listen to the words i just told ya

ya wanna know hot to stop pollution
well ill tell ya theirs only one sollution

ya gotta step up + throw away your trash
i guarentee it will save the whole world cash

and if you recycle its also a fact
you may even get some of that cash back

dont be dumb dont litter
it makes the world sicker which makes me feel bitter
i feel bad for the animals in the river
destroyin their habitat + poisenin their dinner.

haha what you think??
any ad ons?

S Gares · 05-08-2008, 02:51 PM

i usually think of the main part of the line EX: Cigarette Butts...

and try to think as many things as possible to rhyme with cigarette, then butts....but if its too hard..just rhyme it with butts...

i think u got the concept tho...sarasota/told ya...

ShadyLP · 05-08-2008, 05:59 PM

Not a big deal since it's only for school but one of the biggest parts in writing is making sure you have a nice flow. Every bar you write say it in your head and think...does this flow well. You may need to fix, subtract, or add a word.

EX:

all around the globe, from hong kong to sarasota
yall better listen to the words i just told ya

It would be hard getting a flow with that so you would want to add *that* after words and it will flow much better. You wouldn't think that one word can make it difference but once you put a song together and sing it that one word can change your whole flow.

DIRTYRU55IAN · 05-08-2008, 09:43 PM

walkin down the street i see ciggarette butts
pop cans, plastic bags even a few cups

i dont understand how they can be so lazy
pollutin the globe man you know thats crazy

some of this trash dont even biodegrade
sooner or later it'll blow up as if a grenade

all around the globe, from hong kong to sarasota
yall better listen to the words that i just told ya

ya wanna know how to stop pollution
well ill tell ya theirs only one sollution

ya gotta step up + throw away your trash
i guarentee it will save some world cash

and if you recycle its also a fact
you may even get some of that cash back

dont be dumb dont litter
it makes the world sicker which makes me feel bitter
feel bad for the animals in the river
destroyin their habitat and poisenin their dinner.

haha what you think??
any ad ons?

-- redid a few words

nsaneprep · 05-10-2008, 02:49 PM

all the pollution from all the pesticides
we just sit here and watch as our mother nature dies

our poor poor earth
=(

GreenPimpin928 · 05-10-2008, 02:53 PM

o ****, i had to coach sum kids to write a song about that **** for earth day '08. Music is my thing, but u aint doin too bad brotha. u got da idea right

DIRTYRU55IAN · 05-10-2008, 03:21 PM

ya can some of you guys just write a bar or too i cant think of anything else.
^^ prep thats a good line

Mr 2ToN · 05-10-2008, 03:29 PM

u could ask eli porter
dude a beast!!!

Kid Steez · 05-10-2008, 03:36 PM

metaphors are your best friend