Revamped 1st Song - Madden Tips, Madden 2009 Tips, Madden 09 Tips, Madden Strategy Guides, & Cheats

ShadyLP · 04-04-2008, 12:06 AM

Changed up a bit and this is my finished song. First song I've ever wrote although I may change up my style a bit.

(Verse 1)

Eyes expanded red cause I don't feel whole
Only feelin half, induced without control
Reason to suceed because life may be
Measuring life with angles to the highest degree
Turning like inside out, living 360
Pain comes and it goes, but wounds always show
Living up high but flat as the plateau
Continue to run but slugg in my dreams
Sloth the walk, sleeping still can't suceed
Buried with my eyes closed open the casket
Securing the seal conceal me a gasket
No light I break dark give me the hatchet
Reincarted, recreated gimme the mic
Consuming no balls so I deliver the strike

(Chorus)
I see what you see
I hear what you hear
But you gotta reach in and rip out all the fear
Rip out all the struggles, rip out all the pain
Whether missing or lost you will always regain

(Verse 2)

I fly but I fall
I walk though I crawl
But although I may cower I'll always stand tall
From beginning to end I will never descend
Because the force is with you, you can accept or not
You can drop it and break or abandon the rot
You have to live the dream, it's your only ambition
Because fighting the urges is your #1 mission
People advocate they life as if they diseased
Fight, defend, and oppose, thats what were to be
Crush the the impulse, it can't knock you down
Because you have the power to turn it face down
You think up the thoughts but you must swallow the speach
No matter how hard you must open the breach!

(Chorus)
I see what you see
I hear what you hear
But you gotta reach in and rip out all the fear
Rip out all the struggles, rip out all the pain
Whether missing or lost you will always regain

(Verse 3)

Cries heard round the world you can't hear
Shots seen round the world you can't see
Disregarding life it won't happen to me
Pushing aside the facts cause it will never be
Living life as a dream and ignoring the squall
Ignoring the cries and neglecting the call
Always on the fall and never standing stall
Never a clear path, theres always a wall
You feel that is the road, thought that was the way
Viewed path of destruction day after day
Never back down and never back away.
Re-sign from the world you do have call.
You have a meaning in life so break through the wall!

Kid Steez · 04-04-2008, 10:01 AM

good job. but whats it about

ShadyLP · 04-04-2008, 11:11 AM

If you read the lyrics closely and try to interprate some of the lines, mainly in Verse 1 it's about struggles you go through in life and how you want to give up but saying you should never back down and never stop fighting no matter how hard things are coming at you.

Gares · 04-04-2008, 11:54 PM

Nice...i was writin more a a mainstreme song for our mixtape...heres the hook...and give honest opinions...i know it sounds kinda basic...but on this song im trying to lean toward a head bobber instead of telling a story or describing something..

I get gwop, wreck shop..
Never gonna stop for the cheddar on the block..
I stay clean, stay ballin..
the whip game sick, screens fallin..
I got swag, I get it poppin..
Pull up behind me, bass knockin..
I get gwop, wreck shop..
never gonna stop for the cheddar on the block..

ShadyLP · 04-05-2008, 12:14 AM

Nice. Type of lyrics that will actually get you somewhere yet there not ****ty like some Soulja Boy BS. Thats what I'll end up doing. I prefer writing lyrics like above but won't ever get anywhere with **** like that cause thats not how the rap game is now-a-days. 10-15 years ago I could go big with a song like that but now...not even worth it.